I will offer feedback though as I'm posting feedback on every project. My background is in marketing.
Celebrating the achievements of girls and women is done in a too straightforward a fashion.
For example, Marcus Lemonis from the Profit helped a kids clothing store by changing the name to "Cool Kids"
His rational was that he was not a cool kid as a child in school. He wanted a place where everyone could feel cool.
Marcus is normally brilliant, but that was a really bad marketing move. If you have to wear a giant sign announcing to the world that you're cool, well, you're actually a dork. It's almost the equivalent of your mother telling you that you're cool.
Anyone can announce loud and far about celebrating the achievements of women, but like the Cool Kids store, it will have the opposite effect. Subtly and cleverness in a story is "cooler"
You should have a good story that stands on it's own two feet with the "celebrating women" part embedded in the story but not front and center shouting to the high heavens.
